Japanese advice

[winter]

I'm thinking of finally changing my Generator layout to one based on this one, but since it'd also involve finally getting an image-themed layout, a question for people knowledgeable with kanji:

Is

an acceptable way to write "Pit of Hell" in kanji?

And no, I'm not descending to quite those lows of fangirl Japanese - it'll be overlaid with the English version of the title.

(And I hope that's the right kanji for "pit", because it's freaking adorable.)

Comments

[winter]

Hmm, isn't 穴 closer to "cave" or "grave"? I tend to associate it with something long and narrow. I've always taken pit-of-hell to be the lowest of all hells rather than a cave in hell :) 凹地 as "hollow in the earth" (suggested by jisho.org) might be closer, but I might just try the layout with both.

[merentha.livejournal.com]

(Kubochi) 窪地 is more of a depression on the ground. (Ana) 穴 may refer to either a cave or a deep pit.