Japanese advice

[winter]

I'm thinking of finally changing my Generator layout to one based on this one, but since it'd also involve finally getting an image-themed layout, a question for people knowledgeable with kanji:

Is

an acceptable way to write "Pit of Hell" in kanji?

And no, I'm not descending to quite those lows of fangirl Japanese - it'll be overlaid with the English version of the title.

(And I hope that's the right kanji for "pit", because it's freaking adorable.)

Comments

[winter]

Actually, the second is what I used :P

[sukeban.livejournal.com]

Okay, so try the first link then XD

[winter]

And ooh, nice brush font, thanks :) I assume the kanji themselves look fairly okay?

[sukeban.livejournal.com]

One of the fonts (K? M?) looks like this, for example:

http://pics.livejournal.com/sukeban/pic/00035xk9

The characters aren't that commmon, and the sentence (天上天下唯雅独尊) is a Buddhist proverb...