writing woes

[winter]

*hiss* *spit*

*gouges out someone's eyeballs for the hell of it*

Grr. Bloody twisted, uncooperative anime fictives.

Anybody on the f-list feel up to taking a critical look at a short X/1999 post-series piece sometime after the weekend? One with an S/K lemon in it?

(And now off to write said lemon. That's one thing I can't do in a lecture hall, with a guy on either side looking over my shoulder...)

ETA: S and K being uncooperative again. But I don't care, because... You know how sometimes you get a piece of feedback that's both positive and intelligent that you know someone smart really liked your writing? That's a feeling that can't be beaten. That quiet little squee from the depths of my heart.

Comments

[shisakura.livejournal.com]

Mm. I guess I could *curious* But you know, I'm not a writer so I probably won't be much of help.

[winter]

What I really need is someone to tell me whether they're still recognizable as X characters :) Style- and grammar-wise I'm usually okay on my own...

[shisakura.livejournal.com]

Well, alright. I suppose I can volunteer then :D

[winter]

*glomps you*

Will send soon as I finish the damn thing.

[shisakura.livejournal.com]

Sure ^^

[guede-mazaka.livejournal.com]

How post-series are we talking about? After vol. 15, my knowledge of X/1999 gets somewhat spotty (I've been bad with the Mandarin practice).

[winter]

Post- as in 2004. I even put in Carmen Davis from my "Back in the Fold" OUATIM series as a cameo character. The setup depends rather heavily on events from X18, so best not to spoil things ;) But hey, my Subaru is all but AU anyway. Twisted bastard.

[emudii.livejournal.com]

...I'd give it a shot, I suppose. I'm current with X. Just please don't subject my fragile eyes to Kamui demanding that Subaru "f*ck (him) like an animal" [actual quote from fic to remain unnamed] and all will be cool with the world <3

[shoiryu.livejournal.com]

....:o Now I wanna see this fic.

[winter]

You're not the only one.

[winter]

Cool, I'll send it your way once I finish the bloody scene :) Kamui's not up to much demanding right now. I think Subaru has to pay more attention to the thin line between erotic asphyxiation and plain strangling...

[ripedecay.livejournal.com]

*is EXTREMELY interested if only for the erotic asphyxiation/plain strangling thing* *purrs*

*is not available to read things next week though*

Well, good luck on the fic XD;;