The novelization's rather lovely - I like the character introspection and the slashy overtones, including the infamous "Obi-Wan studies Anakin's butt" moment. I recommend it :)
So far in the draft progress, in the first large-ish chapter one OC has two lines and a single appearance (without his name being mentioned), while another's existence is indicated with a single line. I think I know how to handle this.
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Date: 2005-08-10 11:48 pm (UTC)So far in the draft progress, in the first large-ish chapter one OC has two lines and a single appearance (without his name being mentioned), while another's existence is indicated with a single line. I think I know how to handle this.