Japanese advice

I'm thinking of finally changing my Generator layout to one based on this one, but since it'd also involve finally getting an image-themed layout, a question for people knowledgeable with kanji:

Is ( this )

an acceptable way to write "Pit of Hell" in kanji?

And no, I'm not descending to quite those lows of fangirl Japanese - it'll be overlaid with the English version of the title.

(And I hope that's the right kanji for "pit", because it's freaking adorable.)