ext_7264 (
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2004-05-07 12:19 am (UTC)
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Lovely interspersing of dialogue and minimalistic descriptions that say so much.
One typo:
"Minus the blood and gore, I should hop. But yeah. Things changed, my gum-selling friend."
'Hope' surely?
Definitely bouncing with anticipation of the next part.
Gina
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One typo:
"Minus the blood and gore, I should hop. But yeah. Things changed, my gum-selling friend."
'Hope' surely?
Definitely bouncing with anticipation of the next part.
Gina